Professor Schlesinger’ Suggested Revisions
1. Page 14, penultimate line: Change ‘state that’ to ‘states that’.
2. Page 16, 3rd line: Change ‘pool of emissions are’ to ‘pool of emissions is.
3. Page 18, penuiltimate line: Change ‘If Illinois was’ to ‘If Illinois were’.
4. Page 20, Caption to Figure 2. Chane ‘GHGEmissions’ to ‘GHG Emissions’, and
move ‘Economic’ to the second line of the caption to Figure 3.
5. Page 21, Footnote 1, penultimate line: Change ‘emissions and trend’ to
‘emissions, and trend’.
6. Page 21 Footnote 2, 3rd line: Change ‘illustrative but’ to ‘illustrative, but’.
7. Page 22, penultimate line: Change ‘temperature or’ to temperature, or’.
8. Page 29, line above ‘Table 7: Change ‘table 7’ to ‘Table 7’.
9. Page 29, last line: Change ‘table 8’ to ‘Table 8’.
10. Page 33, item #3, 1st line: Change “CCAG” to “ICCAG”.
11. Page 34, penultimate paragraph, 4th line: Change “Out of state” to “Out-of-state”.
12. Page 34, last line, page 35, 1st line: Change “to only include” to “to include
only”.
13. Page 35, Scenario #1, 3rd line: Change “Governors’” to “Governor’s”.
14. Page 35, Scenario #2, 1st line: Change “Governor’s.goal’ to “Governor’s goal”.
15. Page 45, line above Adopt a Low Carbon Fuel Standard: Change “-Strategies”
to “Strategies”.
16. Page 45, 5th line from bottom: Change “fuel- efficient” to “fuel-efficient”.
17. Page 46, 2nd paragraph, 3rd line: Change “110mph” to “110 mph”.
18. Page 46, 3rd paragraph, 1st line: Change “would: add” to “would add”.
19. Page 46, 3rd paragraph, 4th line: Change “improvements,” to “improvements;”.
20. Page 46, 3rd paragraph, 5th line: Change “enhancements and” to “enhancements;
and”.
21. Page 46, 4th paragraph, 1st line: Change “Louis January” to “Louis by January”.
22. Page 46, 4th paragraph, 2nd line: Change “January 1,2013” to “January 1, 2013”.
23. Page 47, 3rd paragraph, 3rd line: Change “suburbs and” to “suburbs; and”.
24. Page 47, 4th paragraph, 11th line from the bottom: Change “Require a” to “A”.
25. Page 48, 2nd paragraph, 1st line: Change “land use offset” to “land-use offset”.
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